Warriors Fan Fiction
This is a page where you can post your fan fiction and share it with each other. I never ceased being surprised and delighted by what great writers and storytellers our fans are.
I hope you’ll comment on each others’ work. I’m not going to make ANY comments, though I’ll read as much as I can. 
Please do encourage and support each other and, most of all, enjoy!
UPDATE:
OK, I didn’t explain very well – I told you this was an experiment! How about posting samples of your fan-fic in the comments box on this page and adding a link to where people can find the rest of the story…You young techonobods must have some webspace somewhere to upload an html page with your story pasted into it – or publish it in your own blog…? Would that work? Anyone want to have first go?
PS Here’s an example of how to create a link…
It was quiet in the clearing. Snow covered the frozen earth. Darkness cloaked the valley, unbroken, for up to two moons.
A sleek black tom cat slinked across the camp. He left almost no tracks on the snow, and whatever tracks he did leave were quickly erased by the bitter wind. He shook his fur free of any snow, and then dissapeared into the apprentice den. He reappeared moments later, followed by a yawning and stumbling white she-cat. She took note of her surroumndings. Dark. Cold. Windy. Home. She then noticed two other she-cats. The first warrior had a gray pelt, at least she thought it was grey, with dark splotches randomly distrubuted across her long and soft fur. The other was as white as fresh snow, with black stripes.
“Blacknight, why do we have to wake up so early to patrol? No one is up at this time of day- or is it night? I CAN’T TELL!!” she hissed unhappily.
“Shh! You’ll wake the whole valley up!” The splotch pelted she-cat lashed her tail.
“The reason is, Icepaw, is because we need to refrash scent markers, and make sure Canyonclan or anyone else, is not tresspassing or stealing prey,” Blacknight meowed.
“Not even Glacierstar is up,” Icepaw complained.
“Glacierstar–” The splotch pelted she-cat began.
“Glacierstar has bees in her brain,” gazed up at the hollow tree in the center of the clearin, where GLacierstar slept.
“Icepaw! Show some respect for the Blizzardclan leader! You-re going to fetch her a peice of Warm-prey after the patrol!” Blacknight cuffed her ear.
“Are you three going to stand around all morning or should I fetch a new patrol?” the striped she-cat hissed.
“Snowstripe’s right, we-ve wasted a lot of time,” The splotch pelted she-cat stalked off.
“C’mon, Blacknight, lets not have Splotchpelt beat us,” Ice paw hurried after Splotchpelt and Snowstripe, not bothering to see if Blacknight was following.
The patrol padded out of the camp. Icepaw jumped around, puncing on stray dead leaves and rolling around the snow.
Part 2 of older story (lol I accidentaly pressed Submit comment, oh and I have no website to add link, sry!)
“Icepaw! Behave like an apprentice, not like a kit!” Blacknight hissed at his apprentice.
“Sorry, I just can’t help it!” She stared a Blacknight with huge round eyes, “Its only my second time out of camp.”Blacknight felt his annoyance ebb away as she spoke. He shook his head and stalked further down the path.
Suddenly Icepaw pricked her ears. She heard rumbling. It got louder.
“Blacknight…” Icepaw felt her heartbeat quicken. The ground underneath her began to tremble. Blacknight looked up at the volcano that loomed upover their territory. His eyes widen with terror.
“Avalanche,” he murmured,”AVALANCHE!!!!” Blacknight yolwed as loud as he could.
The patrol raced back to the camp, thankfully it was only a hundred feet away. The patrol yowled the news as loud as possible, and suddenly the camp was alive with action. Icepaw raced into the apprentice den, and apprenticesa were soon being ferreted into a small rabbit-hole sized entrance.
A proud-looking white she-cat emerged out of the hollow log, then gazed around her camp with ice-bluw eyes. She dahsed around the camp leading elders and kits into the rabbit-hole. A dark green tom flitted out of a huge hollow log, followed by a small black cat. Each had a mouthful of herbs.
Part 2 of older story (lol I accidentaly pressed Submit comment, oh and I have no website to add link, sry!)
“Icepaw! Behave like an apprentice, not like a kit!” Blacknight hissed at his apprentice.
“Sorry, I just can’t help it!” She stared a Blacknight with huge round eyes, “Its only my second time out of camp.”Blacknight felt his annoyance ebb away as she spoke. He shook his head and stalked further down the path.
Suddenly Icepaw pricked her ears. She heard rumbling. It got louder.
“Blacknight…” Icepaw felt her heartbeat quicken. The ground underneath her began to tremble. Blacknight looked up at the volcano that loomed upover their territory. His eyes widen with terror.
“Avalanche,” he murmured,”AVALANCHE!!!!” Blacknight yolwed as loud as he could.
The patrol raced back to the camp, thankfully it was only a hundred feet away. The patrol yowled the news as loud as possible, and suddenly the camp was alive with action. Icepaw raced into the apprentice den, and apprenticesa were soon being ferreted into a small rabbit-hole sized entrance.
A proud-looking white she-cat emerged out of the hollow log, then gazed around her camp with ice-bluw eyes. She dahsed around the camp leading elders and kits into the rabbit-hole. A dark green tom flitted out of a huge hollow log, followed by a small black cat. Each had a mouthful of herbs.
“Come on Blizzardpaw, hurry up!” Icepaw urged her littermate.
“I can’t Icepaw, my paw hurts too much!” Blizzardpaw gazed up at his sister with huge round blue eyes. The small black cat glanced at his littermates. Not bothering to see if his mentor allowed him, he dropped his herbs and went to help his brother and sister.
The medicine cat glanced at his new apprentice, then dashed into the Elder’s den, andthen into the apprentice den. The rumbling was almost defeaning. He then raced to the three struggling littermates, grabbed Blizzardpaw by the scruff, and the foursome ran into the rabbithole. The avalanche thundered by the entrance, dumping snow into the rather large den. Pinefrost put Blizzardpaw down, “Blizzardpaw, you told me your paw was fine. Just because you’re injured does make you look weak if you admit it,” PIne frost shook his dark head, then stalked away, weaving inbetween the crowd.
“Shadowpaw! Thanks for helping us,” Icepaw meowed gratefully. Shadowpaw blinked twice, then said, “That was some avalanche.”
“I wonder if this means i won’t have to give Glacierstar that peice of fresh-kill?” Icepaw asked. Suddenly, a black she-cat with green eyes appeared, followed by a brown tabby, with a scarred ear. The she-cat nearly jumped onto ICepaw, covering her with licks.
“Oh, Icepaw, Blizzardpaw, Shadowpaw! YOu’re all okay!!!” She licked BLizzardpaw, and attempted to lick Shadowpaw, who dodged her muzzle and hissed.
“Our kits are okay,” murmured the brown tabby tom. Blizzardpaw and ICepaw suddenly tensed as Glacierstar padded toward them. Shadow paw merely leveled his gaze. Her deputy slinked next to her.
“Frostbite,” he nodded at the brown tabby tom.
“Palesun,” he nodded at the cream colored deputy. Glacierstar ignored the exchange and said to Frostbite,
“Once the avalanche is finished and we dig ourselves out, I want you to organize a patrol and remark the scent boundaries. I don’t want Canyonclan to get any Ideas,” she looked at Shadowpaw, “Pinefrost was looking for you.” Glacierstar turned and left. Palesun glaced at the black she-cat and walked away after Glascierstar. “Loners” he muttered.
“Hey! The rumbling stopped!” a sleek gray warrior yowled above the din.
“Dig!”
“GO!”
“Now!”
Everyone began to dig at once, the Sleek gray tom reached light first, and yowled in surprise.
A golden furred tom was staring back at him.
“CAnyonclan!!!” he yowled, then launched himslef at the golden tom. The whole of Blizzardclan poured out of the den. The grey tom and the golden tom broke apart. Icepaw, Blizzardpaw, and Shadowpaw pushed themsleves to the front of the group. Icepaw was surprised to see a group no bigger than a patrol. The golden tom looked like the leader, he had not a scratch on him. There was a brown tabby tom, a ginger she-cat, gray she-cat, long-haired gray tom, and lastly a gray tabby tom.
“Blizzardclan,” Hissed Glacierstar, “Attack.” all of the warriors began to attack the patrol at once. all except for the black she-cat with green eyes. She suddenly yowled as if all of StarClan was yowling with her, “STOP!!!!” everycat stopped fighting at once.
“BLizzardclan, tstop fighting these cats. She stood in fornt of the patrol, facing the Blizard caln cats.
“They don’t even smell like any other clan. To you they should smell strange. To me, they smell very familiar. Too familiar. These aren’t loners, or rouges. This… I can’t believe myself but this… this is A patrol from Thunderclan, were I came from.” The black she cat turned to the patrol.
“Is it really you, Hollyleaf?” Jayfeather turned his blind gaze toward her. Lionblaze gazed at her, too shocked to speak.
“Thunderclan, this is Blizzardclan, my home.” Hollyleaf meowed.
Can someone read mine? I want to know if its any good so i can continue
Tigerstar Returns Part 3
Jayfeather grimaced, and pulled the thorn out of Millie’s paw. Millie gasped, then settled down and began rapidly licking her paw. “Thanks, Jayfeather,” she said in between licks.
“Just be careful around the thorn barrier until Brambleclaw fixes it,” Jayfeather warned.
Millie purred in amusment.
“Hows Briarlight?” Jayfeather asked.
Millie hesitated. “She’s…she’s still a little upset,” she mewed, her voice coming out in a hushed whisper. “I guess really-”
“BRACKENFUR!”
The yowl exploded across the clearing, making Jayfeather jump. He flattened his bristling fur.
“That sounds like Sorreltail!” Millie exclaimed, and Jayfeather could picture her, ears pricked towards the entrance to the medicine cats den.
Jayfeather rushed outside. The tang of blood filled the air. All around him, startled cats rushed from their dens.
“What’s going on here?” Mousefur croaked.
“Wh-oh no, are they alright?” Daisy cried.
“Oh, no, StarClan!” Ferncloud gasped.
Why can’t I see? Jayfeather thought grimly. He could smell Firestar, and Lionblaze, mixed with other cats-and blood.
He caught a whiff of Sorreltail too. Millie pushed past him, before wobbling. He quickly supported her weight. “What is it?” he asked hurriedly.
“Oh-oh, Greystripe!” Millie yowled, rushing past Jayfeather on unsteady paws. Jayfeather felt his frustration grow. Why won’t anyone tell me what’s wrong?
Leafpool came and stood next to him. “It looks bad,” she reported. “We’ll need lots of cobwebs and-”
“I’m the medicine cat now, not you,” Jayfeather snarled at her. “You made that decision when you betrayed our Clan.”
The scents grew nearer, and Leafpool left. Jayfeather backed into his den. “What happened?”
“A cat attatcked them, that’s for sure!” Brambleclaw mewed hoarsely.
Millie and Sorreltail were nudging their mates desperatly. Briarlight pushed her way in, followed by Bumblestripe, Cinderheart and Poppyfrost. “Oh-no!” Cinderheart croaked, before falling before her father.
Jayfeather began sniffing up Greystripe’s leg, and his nose plunged into a very deep cut. He pushed a wad of cobwebs onto it, and nudged another pile towards Millie, Firestar, Squirrelflight and Bumblestripe. “Brambleclaw, keep that cobweb on there. You four put cobwebs on the other wounds!”
He turned to Brackenfur and sniffed him all over. His wounds were not as bad as Greystripe’s, and unlike the other warrior, he was not breathing rapidly, but Jayfeather thought he had a broken leg. What do I do? he thought in a panic.
Just then, coughing, Brackenfur became concious. He winced as he tried to move his broken leg. “W-where am I?”
“Hush! Your in Thunderclan, in Jayfeather’s den.” Sorreltail gave Brackenfur’s ears a few loving licks; Jayfeather could hear the rasp of her tongue.
Brackenfur coughed again. “I-it was Tigerstar a-and Brokens-star. H-e he sa-” Brackenfur broke off in another burst of coughing. “He said ThunderClan knew what to expect.”
Jayfeather stiffened. He had met the dark tabby before, when he was a confused apprentice. But Tigerstar was stuck in that foresty place! How could he get out?
Jayfeather’s heart raced. This was not good-not for Thunderclan, or any of the Clans.
Jayfeather turned his sightless eyes towards Firestar. He could smell the fear scent radiating off him. How would their Clan leader cope now, when he knew his best friend was deeply unconcious, and that his deadliest enemy was stalking the forest?
THAT WAS SOO HARD TO WRITE. IT WAS SOOO TEMPTING JUST TO WRITE, “He saw Brackenfur and Greystripe lying in a pool of blood.”
Anyway…
To Be Continued…
I was looking for this one Fanfic, and stumbled upon this one instead (I’m still looking for my other one, though :p)
So here’s my thinking of what would happen when Cloudtail died.
Cloudtail’s white tail flicked just once before it was still. In the back of the elder’s den, his spirit was lost to all of ThunderClan. They didn’t know it until the following morning. What they will never know is what happened next.
Cloudtail opened his eyes slowly into a vast emptiness of blackness. Farther down, there was a small white-light. He started walking to it. As he got up, he realized his bones and joints no longer hurt. Though he could hear no sound so he assumed he was still deaf.
“Cloudtail…” Suddenly there was a whisper, but no more than an echoed one at that.
Cloudtail strained his ears, desperately trying to hear more until it came again only louder: “Cloudtail, come here!”
Cloudtail looked around but instead of seeing something come from the light, another cat emerged from the darkness, her black pelt almost invisible in the darkness and her green eyes glowing.
“You’re going the wrong way,” the black she-cat mewed.
“No, Cloudtail don’t listen to her!” Cloudtail turned around towards the light and saw another she-cat, Bluestar, running towards him. “You must come with me!”
“Bluestar?” Cloudtail asked with the tilt of his head. “What’s going on here?”
“He must come with me! He doesn’t believe in StarClan!” The black she-cat spat as she said StarClan.
“He’s a brave and loyal warrior and a credit to his Clan! StarClan has agreed that he may come!” Bluestar spat back.
“No! You are bound by the rules! He does not believe in you and he has not lived by your code entirely! He belongs with us.” The black cats’ eyes grew intense with hatred at the blue she-cat.
“StarClan deem him worthy!” Bluestar insisted.
“Wait!” Cloudtail cried out, fed up with them arguing as if he wasn’t there. “Don’t I get a say in this?”
Bluestar looked at the black cat and they both nodded. “You decide,” they both concluded.
“I have never believed in StarClan and you just show up now? Once I’m dead? Why couldn’t you prove me that you were real when I was alive?” Cloudtail asked with a slight snarl.
“We could not come to you for you didn’t believe in us. You were not willing to accept dreams from StarClan,” Bluestar explained.
“But you could have done something!” he insisted. “I mean, here I am being a warrior of ThunderClan and not believing in you then you suddenly turn up when I’m dead?”
Bluestar rolled her eyes. “Cloudtail, do you want to join StarClan or the Dark Forest? It’s your choice!”
The black cat stepped up. “Cloudtail think about it. They are weak and when you were alive they didn’t even bother to try and let you see that they were real! Is that not betrayal?” She suddenly licked her lips as if she was tasking a good piece of fresh-kill. “But if you come with me, you will be honored. Eventually.”
Cloudtail looked from the black cat to Bluestar then at his paws. “If it’s my choice, then I choose…Life.”
“Cloudtail, you know you can’t go back! You died,” Bluestar pointed out.
“So come to the Dark Forest!” the black cat mewed as she sat down next to him.
“If I come to StarClan, will Brightheart be there?” Cloudtail asked while looking up at Bluestar.
Bluestar nodded. “She is waiting.”
Cloudtail nodded and took a step to follow Bluestar up to StarClan. He turned back to the black cat, her green eyes flashing with hatred at the two cats before he waved his tail in good-bye.
“Good-bye, Hollyleaf,” he mewed and then he and Bluestar disappeared as they were sent back up to StarClan.
omg this is really good!!
Thanks!
Wowzas…that’s BRILLIANT! Didn’t think for the tiniest SECOND it would be Hollyleaf.
I like Cloudy. HE MUST GO TO STARCLAN. HE MUST.
Lol, that last bit wuz funny about writing it. Really good
A bit more for Skyclan’s Destiny.
“Hang on! The kits are coming soon,” Echosong meowed in a calm tone. “Frecklewish, watch me carefully. I want you to receive the next kit.” As Echosong yelled her instructions to Frecklewish, there was uneasiness in her eyes. I never thought that having kits would be such a pain. It seemed as if every cat in the clan was gathered around the nursery trying to be the first to see their clan leader’s kit.
“It’s beautiful Leafstar!” Frecklewish cried happily. It was a tom with a pelt like his father and the amber eyes of her mother. Indeed it was beautiful.
“Frecklewish, keep licking the kit, I want it nice and warm, while I receive the other kit,” Echosong meowed while trying to keep Leafstar ready for the other kit. As Echosong started to push the other kit out with her paws, Leafstar let out another yell of pain before lying down flat again. That was almost as bad as losing a life. Thank Starclan it’s over. I could just hear Billystorm’s voice over all the talking, but I couldn’t quite make out what Billystorm said and before I had a chance to ask, Echosong meowed from within:
“Yes Billystorm, you can come in now,” Echosong sighed as she replied.
“Now will you stop whining as if Leafstar is losing a life, and instead you can get some borage to help the milk come and poppy seeds as well. I want her to have a good sleep before getting back to clan duties.” I could just make out Billystorm before he ran out into the clearing as I closed my eyes.
***
“Wake up Leafstar! It’s daybreak already!”
“ Don’t wake her up! She needs as much sleep as she can get. Now go outside and play.”
“ But we wanted to play with Leafstar!”
“What’s wrong?” My eyes felt like they were about to drop. I couldn’t make out who was talking, but I’m sure it was Firekit and Icekit. As I let out a huge yawn, I could just make out the other queen Clovertail as she scolded my kits. I let out a murmur of laughter
“It’s ok Clovertail, there’s no harm done. Well, kits, I’m awake now, so what do you want to play?”
“The twolegs attack!” Firekit and Icekit cried in unison.
“So I’m the twoleg then. I’m going to get you for breakfast!” Before we had a chance to play, Billystorm’s patrol was back. They seemed to be in a hurry for some reason. I got up and walked slowly over to hear the news. Billystorm was standing below the Rockpile, obviously waiting for me to give permission to speak.
“What news have you brought us, Billystorm?” Leafstar asked from just below the crowd.
“Our patrol has scented a fox den near our twoleg border, and it seems like a family too. We tried to track it, but the scent trail disappeared into the twoleg place.” Why would a fox want anything to do with twolegs? Unless it doesn’t have enough food to eat!
“I want extra border patrols near the twoleg area, and make sure to check for fresh scent marks too. I also want all the kits to stay in camp, and all apprentices must not leave unless a warrior is with them. Creekfeather and Mintcloud shall stay on guard tonight. This meeting is over. Billystorm, meet me in the leader’s den now, and I want you to tell me every detail.” I hope I made the right decision; it’s leaf-bare and we can’t afford more warriors on border patrol, but we can’t let that fox scare away all our food either. Something must be done! But what? In the end, Leafstar decided to ask Billystorm for advice. Maybe he’ll have an idea, Leafstar thought as she carefully climbed into the Leader’s den. Awkwardly Leafstar placed herself into a sitting position. It’s seems a lot bigger since I was last here. It must be my imagination, she persuaded herself.
“Leafstar? Why are you just standing there?” Billystorm asked in his charming voice as usual.
“Oh!” She was so lost in thought that she didn’t notice Billystorm until he spoke up. What should I tell him? His own leader can’t even make a decision? Will he laugh at me? No, she thought firmly to herself. Billystorm is not that kind of cat. Shyly she thought to herself, that was why she loved him after all, so loyal and friendly.
“Billystorm, do you think my decision was right? Leafbare’s here, and we can’t afford more border patrols. Everyone is starving, and because of the cold all the prey is in hiding. I’m afraid the elders and Clovertail’s kit will starve. I don’t know what to do!” she mewed weakly, and Billystorm could tell she was about to cry. Billystorm leaned on her shoulder and gently he started to lick her ears.
“Don’t worry. I’m sure your decision was right and we’ll make it though. After all, leafbare will soon end and it will be newleaf again. Don’t let the fox get to you. You’ll always be my hero.” He tried his best to sound cheerful, and that did the trick for Leafstar.
“You sure?” she said weakly, but with a lot more cheer than before.
“I’ve never lied to you, have I?” teased Billystorm.
No, she thought to herself, I shouldn’t have doubted myself and every other cat. With these thoughts she fell asleep.
***
She slowly opened her eyes and found herself in total darkness. Where am I? Leafstar asked herself. Just as she said that, she could see that the whole forest had begun to move, making her dizzy, and she dropped onto the ground. Then she spotted movement; a dark shadow began to move slowly towards her. “Spottedleaf, Cloudstar?” she asked, but it came out no more than a whisper.
“Darkness will once again rule, only the wing of ice will once again freeze the darkness to nothingness.” The voice was harsh and cold, it had no emotion as it speak. “Beware. Betrayal…….”
Before the voice could finish speaking, Leafstar awoke with the harsh tug. “Wait! Who are you, and what is coming?!” Leafstar yelled as she rose from her nest. Then a gentle pat on the shoulder, which made her feel like a kit again, wanting to cry.
“Leafstar are you ok? Did you have a nightmare?” came the voice of Billystorm, which sounded calming as usual.
“I… had a really weird dream.” She hesitated before she told him the prophecy. “A voice spoke to me a prophecy, ‘Darkness will once again rule, only the wing of ice will once again freeze the darkness to nothingness Beware. Betrayal…….’He didn’t finish his sentence. I don’t know what he means, darkness and the wing of ice. What are they?!” She was so confused that her mews became so shaken, Billystorm had to lean on top of her to hear what she said. Shakily Leafstar tipped her head up so she could see Billystorm. She couldn’t make out his expression but she knew he was having a hard time figuring out what the prophecy meant just like her. It was a relief that she’s not the only one having trouble with the prophecy, even if it’s just a bit.
“Do you know what today is?” Joked Leafstar.
“Of course, how could I forget. Today our kits become apprentices!” Billystorm said proudly.
“It’s going to start soon so groom the kits for me will you? I need to call the meeting.” Leafstar mewed as she ran out the den to the Rockpile.
Leaping up to the top of the Rockpile, she yowled. “Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the Rockpile for a clan meeting!”
She gazed down, everyone’s here. Good, she thought. Then she noticed the dawn patrol’s not back yet! What’s taking them so long? “Today is a proud day for Skyclan, by naming these apprentices. Icekit and Firekit please come forth. Icekit, from now on until you receive your warrior name you shall be known as Icepaw! Mintfur, you are ready for an apprentice, you will be Icepaw’s mentor. I know you will pass down on your Strength, Wisdom, and loyalty to Icepaw, and teach her the skills that will make her a brave warrior of Skyclan.” I felt pride as Icepaw touched nose with her mentor. I can’t stop yet, there is another ceremony coming up, she turn her gaze on Firekit as she reminded herself. “Firekit, from now on until you receive your warrior name you shall be known as Firepaw! Bouncefire, you have learned well from Patchfoot and I hope you pass down your skills to this apprentice.” Once again proud filled Leafstar, as the crowd cheered their name.
“Firepaw, Icepaw!” the cats gathered around them with excited glace, and she could tell Billystorm’s voice rise above them all. The cheering soon stops with the appearance of Tinycloud and the dawn patrol.
“Leafstar! We have found fox tracks leading outside the twoleg dens and onto our territory beside the Gorge! The track led to a river and we couldn’t find any more footprints after that.” Tinycloud’s voice sound scared as a mice being hunted down. Leafstar bounced of the Rockpile to face Tinycloud.
“Was the river in our territory?” Leafstar asked. She had to make sure they are not just passing through; even if it’s dangerous we can’t attack them unless we are sure their invading.
“Yes, just at the border.”
“We need a plan.”
Chapter one completed.
Awesome!
Chapter 1 “Deadly News”
Runningpaw crashed towards MistClan camp. The patrol of warriors was ahead of her; The muscular black shape of Darkfur;the thin outline of Redfire; the golden body of Sunlight.
They all heavily bled, and Darkfur was limping heavily on a newly broken paw. They skidded to a halt when Blazingstar raced out of his den, his eyes wide. “What happened?” he yowled, over the meows of the Clan. They fell silent, listening. “W-we were p-patrolling the Sunni-S-Sunninglog,” stuttered Runningpaw. “We were attacked b-b-b-by a group of rogues! T-ten of them. We barely ma-ma-made it!”
Blazingstar’s gold-ginger pelt bristled, and his firey orange eyes blared. “We must send out patrols immedialty! Bloodpool, Streamshine, Lionclaw, Sharpfeather, Darkwhisker and Flowercloud, go!” The cats he called raced through the ferns. “Leaftail and Chillfrost, guard the camp.” A white she-cat with one green eye and one blue eye raced to one side of the camp, while the brownish ginger she-cat raced to another side, her green eyes alarmed.
The medicine cat, a pretty pale gold she-cat with darker legs, immediatly came out with cobwebs, poppyseeds, and some fern leaves. Her apprentice, a gray tom with glittering amber eyes, followed, helping carry out supplies. Immediatly, The medicine cat helped Darkfur’s paw, while the medicine cat apprentice helped his friend, Runningpaw.
Runningpaw winced as Smokeheart pressed cobwebs on her wounds. Her ear was torn, her sides were smeared with blood, one of her sparkling yellow eyes scratched badly. “You must have fought hard to have survived,” Smokeheart murmured.
When Sunlight and Redfire were healed, they padded stiffly towards the warriors den, telling about how they fought. Darkfur was tended to, his broken paw wrapped in fern leaves, which were closed tight with horsetail.
Honeysong, the medicine cat, came to help Smokeheart. “Her side have stopped bleeding, none with be scars by the look of them, her ear has stopped, but her eye is still bleeding badly,” The gray tom reported. Honeysong nodded, then examined her eye closely. “We need something to keep infection from crawling in.” Smokeheart raced off, then returned with some herbs and berries. He mixed them together, then they spat them gently on her eye.
The other apprentice, a dusty-gray tom named Dustpaw, Runningpaw’s mother, Roseflower, a pinkish-orange she-cat, watched in horror, and Blazingstar sat, anxiously waiting for news. “I can’t see!” Runnigpaw wailed.
The whole Clan heard her yowl, and they all curiously peered around the group of cats that gathered around the young, light brown she-cat. The white and gold patches on her fur were red from blood.
Her left eye was clouded and sightless.
“I-I can’t believe it,” whispered Dustpaw, horrified. He walked up and licked her forehead genlty a couple of times, his amber eyes brimming with sorrow.
***
The patrol returned, but they only had a couple of scratches. “Dead!” announced the deputy, Bloodpool. The cats all felt cheered, but not Runningpaw. She couldn’t see well anymore. Will I be able to become a warrior? she thought. If not, what could she do to fit in with the Clan? Would her mentor, Redfire, be disappointed after four moons of training?
That evening, Runningpaw painfully stalked towards the apprentice’s den. Dustpaw and Runningpaw were the only apprentices, and they were nursery-mates together. Dustpaw’s mother, Snowpelt, was friends with Roseflower.
Dustpaw and Runningpaw talked for a while. Runningpaw saw Redfire and Blazingstar talking. Then Blazingstar nodded, and he leaped onto the Highrock. As he summoned the cats, he began to talk.
“Now today one of our apprentice’s fought in the battle with the rogues. Redfire thinks that she’ll be able to become a warrior. Her moves now will be good use, for she can use them without usage of her eye.” Loud yowls rose from the crowd. Dustpaw and Runningpaw looked at each other. Runningpaw forgot her grief and her pelt bristled. She could become a warrior after all!
“Step forward, Runningpaw.” Blazingstar looked at Silverpelt. “I, Blazingstar, leader of MistClan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on this apprentice. She has trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend her to you as a warrior.” Blazingstar glared at Runningpaw. “Runningpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code, and to protect and defend this Clan, even at the cost of your life?” “I do.” “Then by the powers of StarClan I give you your warrior name; Runninpaw, from this moment on you’ll be known as Runningspirit. StarClan honors your bravery and spirit, and we welcome you as a full warrior of MistClan.”
“Runningspirit! Runningspirit!”
sorry about the grammar
Chapter 1
”I don’t know what to do Brightsun. I need your help. No don’t leave me here! I need you!” Brokenmoon woke with the dream in his head. The big muscular brown tabby was scared of the prophacy he was told.I don’t know what to do, he tought to himself. His mate Dreamsun was already awake.Dawn patrol. It was still dark and cold. Leaf-bare is finaly over and New-leaf was begining. Waterclan sufferd alot this leaf-bare. Rarepelt got greenchouf and Winterlove drowned. At least today we’ll be having a warrior ceremonie today.His toughts of the dream dissapeerd whe nhe joined the hunting patrol. He priked his ear and heard a dornmouse.He went step for step carefully not to step on anything that might break and in a split second he grabed it and killed it with a soft blow. The hunting patrol came back just before sunhigh. He also caught a vole and a water shrew . He place it carefully on top of the fresh kill pile. He scoped the camp. He was comforted by the sound of the water fall. The camp was an island between a stream that climbes a steep hill and comes to a waterfall that becomes a deep river with brambels on the inside of the camp for protection. The hill is on the inside flat with dens for the aprentises that are in the left corner and the leaders’ den are all the way up on the highest ledge.Theres a log in the infront of the wall called the Great Log, thats where the leaders adress there clan. Theres a cave behind the water fall where the medicencat den is. The elders den is on the left side of the island next to the apprentice den and is made ot of a log that is broken in two and a hollybush for shelter.Two of the oldest elders sleep in the logs and the others sleep under the bush. The nursery is next to the medice its a old bagger set nexto a huge rock that shelers the hole from wind rain and snow. And the warrior den is just a bramble thicket that provides shadow and is quite large.’There you are, I’ve being looking everywhere for you’ greeted Dreamsun .’It’s time for Flypaw and Rosepaw two get there warrior names’.Brokenmoon nodded.’Let’s go; he added before padding of to the Great Log after his mate.’Let all cats old enough to climb the wall come to
the clearing for a clan meeting.’ Many cats were already there.He could see Flypaw getting cleaned up by his mother Ashwisker.Mothers! Dreamsun started speaking.’Flypaw and Rosepaw come forward’. The two cats came forward one at a time with there mentors. Flypaw with his mentor Sunshine, and Rosepaw with hers, Patchfrost. Brokenmoon started ‘Do you, Flypaw promise to uphold the warrior code for the rest of youe life and sacrifice yourself for your clan’. Oh no, what should I call him…Flyheart, Flypelt, Flynose?’I do’ called the apprentice.’Then from this day forward, you will be know as Flyclaw, for your streght that you have and the wisdom.’Now Rosepaw” This time it was Dreamsun who spoke, the female leader.’Do you promise to uphold the warrior code for the rest of your life and sacrifice yourself for your clan’ ‘I do’She responded imidiatly ‘Then from this day forward you will be called Rosefoot, because at your second moon you broke your left foot but you just kept on going.’All the cats started yowling “Flyclaw! Rosefoot! Flyclaw! Rosefoot’ Suddenly Brokenmoon saw a strange cat walking towards him. A silver cat that aperently no one else could see.”Beware Brokenmoon, you will not expect what will fly from a claw.
oh and sorry that i don’t have so many details
Tigerstar’s Return Part 4
(I would do it from Ivypaw’s point of veiw, but I really don’t like her, and it would be hard for me to get her in the medicine cats den to check on how Brackenfur and Greystripe (Rules) are doing…So I’m just sticking to The Three’s point of veiw. Enjoy!)
Dovepaw blinked drowsily. She didn’t have a vision yet. She shuddered, thankful. She didn’t want to see those cats again.
Last night, Firestar had stayed with Greystripe all night long. Brackenfur was recovering, and as well as Millie, Sorreltail was with him every moment she could. Firestar had excused them both from warrior duties so they could care for their sick mates.
Firestar, refusing to leave Greystripe’s side, asked Brambleclaw to hold a Clan meeting. Dovepaw’s heart once again rang with sympthay for the dark tabby warrior. Brambleclaw’s voice was shaking as he described as his father had injured severely two warriors, and was now roaming the forest.
But Dovepaw could tell Brambleclaw was hiding something. There was guilt in his eyes. And when she turned to Lionblaze, Dovepaw saw that he too was avoiding eye contact with any ThunderClan cat.
“Dovepaw. Wake up. It’s time to go to the Gathering.”
Dovepaw blinked the sleep out of her blue eyes. Lionblaze stood in front of her, with Foxleap behind him.
“Isn’t Ivypaw coming?”
“No. Firestar doesn’t want to take too many warriors.”
“Where’s Jayfeather?”
“He has to care for Brackenfur and Greystripe.”
Dovepaw leaped out of her mossy bed, wondering how the Clan leader would react to leaving his best friend. He was standing in front of Dustpelt, Berrynose, Brightheart, Cloudtail and Brambleclaw. Foxleap, Dovepaw and Lionblaze hurried to join them.
Sandstorm supported her mate’s weight. “Come on, Firestar…Let’s go.”
Leaving one last wistful look at the medicine cat’s den, Firestar left the clearing.
“RiverClan has two new kits…Jumpkit and Flowerkit. We also have a new apprentice, Goldpaw, and a new warrior, Gladetail. The fish are swimming. We mourn the loss of our brave elder, Fishleap.”
Mistyfoot nodded towards Blackstar.
“ShadowClan has two new warriors…Petalleaf and Sunglow. The prey is running. Onestar?”
Onestar dipped his head to the ShadowClan leader. “Thank you, Blackstar. WindClan has been well fed this moon. We have three new kits, Leafkit, Bluekit and Pantherkit. Firestar?…Firestar?”
Firestar was staring into space, his eyes confused. He jumped when Onestar adressed him. “O-oh. Yes, um…”
Mumurers ran through the Clans-Dovepaw glared at the two WindClan apprentices glaring at her.
“ThunderClan has news that could affect every Clan…” Firestar began. He coughed, then continued, “Two of our warriors were brutally attacked last night.”
“He’s not suggesting us, is he?”
“How dare he!”
“RiverClan has not harmed your warriors!”
“Who did it?”
Firestar turned, strangely calm, to the masses of cats. “It is believed to be Tigerstar.”
His voice was almost drowned out by the gasps. Then complete and utter silence.
Dovepaw fidgeted nervously, looking down at her paws. She could sense the WindClan apprentices next to her looking at her strangely, and she shifted closer to Lionblaze, who was sitting tall.
She blinked, and shadows moved. Startled, she fixed her eyes on the Clan leaders. They all seemed to not know what to say.
Closing her eyes, she focused on her vision. Darkness flooded her. Then silhouettes in the distance moved. The silhouettes of three cats. Misty but very real. She recognised two of them already. But the other was unrecognizable to Dovepaw.
Snapping open her eyes, she barged through the cats bodies. She stopped by the tree where the leaders sat.
“Dovepaw?” Firestar sounded surprised, but he did not question her abilities. He knew. He knew it was important.
Suddenly feeling scared in the moonlight, Dovepaw stood high. “Cats of all Clans! You must leave here now! Go, quick!”
“Why?”
Dovepaw shivered and her voice squeaked. “Because Tigerstar is heading for the gathering this instant!”
Pantherkit, Petalleaf, Sunglow, Jumpkit, Flowerkit, Goldpaw and Fishleap do not appear in Warriors, only in my fanfic (as far as I am aware.) Bluekit and Leafkit DO appear as Warriors, but they are different cats from Bluestar and Leafpool. Gladetail belongs to me.
Any other names belong to Warriors and Erin Hunter.
To Be Continued…